|Reviews for august|
| JaNde 11/6/06 . chapter 1
wow. I didn't really understand this, but it's GOOD. *bows* I'm used to your style again. it's quite interesting! I'm intrigued. I'll be reading more
| diffident 8/18/06 . chapter 1
It's so slow and sleepy, like the hot summer day that August is, and there are gleaming grains of dust floating through the light. It strikes me as more gorgeous every time I read it.
| Moondog Dozier 8/15/06 . chapter 1
I like the use of time, months and season in this. "turn infinity into tomorrow-as the days pass slowly by", crawls so well along with the words. Very representative of the month and what it embodies for many people. Great write.
| shutupcharlotte 8/9/06 . chapter 1
the stale feel of august, i know it. love this poem for catching that. good job! ]
| Elenive 8/8/06 . chapter 1
This is a good poem, but for some reason, the feeling of it seems obscure. The diction is great, but I can't quite sink in to it.
| Aquafied 8/7/06 . chapter 1
august is not my favorite month. its the month of disdain and oh tomorrows.
| arcane devices 8/7/06 . chapter 1
I'll have to concur with poetic abortion here. It's a wonderful short piece. I especially enjoyed the line "turn infinity into tomorrow". I'll see you on your next update. - Arcane Devices
| midnight skies are scarlet red 8/5/06 . chapter 1
Amazing. If jesus were to sing a sing (Assuming im christian, although Im not... Im just making a point) these would be the lyrics.
Beautiful, raw, elegant.
| Ashes.to.Acid 8/3/06 . chapter 1
Gorgeous It gives a new twist on the changing seasons.
| poetic abortion 8/3/06 . chapter 1
Beautiful; short, brisk, amazing, and just so pretty. I love so many lines in this it is hard to say if the whole thing has me spellbound.
| drippingdreams 8/3/06 . chapter 1
Pretty words, beautiful images. I especially like the first stanza and the last stanza. :)
| Jen calculates 8/3/06 . chapter 1
Wow, I love it. Wistful and beautiful. Great job :)