he sounds interesting, but no more quirky than an average kid.
i like the way you twist your words. and the parenthesis.
i pretty much like it all.

This sounds me when I was in elementary school. :)

this is wonderful. I like the way you twist words around and sayings and it's just very well thought out and done. the piece, quite simply, works.

Interesting piece. Not a lot of slick to it, very straightforward characterization poem. I like the food that pops up all the way through :)

:D

I really do think that ^ sums up my feelings on this :). Just left me smiling. The content is great and showcase your writings skills. Great job :D

'He believed me when I told him gullible wasn't in the dictionary'. ^^

My mom wants to know how old you are. O.o

Ohmy god, how ** halarious is your friend, i love him to bits. Loved all of this, oh my god, he can't be real...

Peace out, kenzie

I like it. A lot. A lot a lot, actually. Kinda sounds like it could be about one of your closest friends, or a crush or something. But it's really cute, and it flows excellently.

This was fascinating. I like the little details, like "(it was an April issue)". The style is unusual, and flowing. Over all, really, really good.

love this.. so cute and strange and it's different

just like how everything sort of contradicts itself, but sort of makes sense.

fantastic job!

I really reaaly like this. Very abstract. Kinda random. But I love the last line. And all the lines before. My kinda poem! Good job! (And he sounds like an interesting guy :)