This is such a sad and beautiful poem. The rhyming adds an extra touch that makes it unique. Great Job and keep writing. Thanks for the review... (we have the same b-day!!)

this one is no doubt a beautifully written poem.

-sigh- it's a shame that the most beautiful poems are actually those filled with melancholy, angst, sufferings and pain.

i'm scared, honestly. i know you, but at the same time i don't. i don't want to lose you all of a sudden. please, don't just leave without saying goodbye. let me help you stand even though i'm trying to myself. we can struggle together.

i love you very very very much nat-chan. -hugs-

~syv

I always hated english but I loved to write. I love the way you worded that. Did you mean that you were made out of glass where people saw right through you? Like I said, keep on writing and you'll show your teacher and classmates that you are who you are. Kudos to you. Joey

Wow, this is good, cheers to being bored in english!

I feel like that during school and while I'm at home. Thanks for reviewing my poem. I will post more as I get time. I like the imagery of glass used here.

being bored in english! never! Anyway great poem, loved the repetition, thanks for the sweet review - Alyssa

*woo hoo!* yay for being bored in english class! haha, thats usually when i write my poems too, during skool, when I so don't want to learn about Precalc. or american govt lol..can ya blame it? :P ne ways

I loved this poem, your "flow" of this poem was nice, it was an easy one to read for eyes, i guess you could put it. And I loved your second stanza, kind of gives you goosebumps when you read it I guess. :) This is just an all around good poem! You did excellent with it, and it depicts a good message. We all have our weak spots, we're all fragile when it comes to certain things, b/c we can't be strong all the time no matter how hard we try :) *keep writing!* this was good!

~Britney

and thanks so much for the review! It means alot! :D

Great poem and true too. Though we hate to admitt it, we are all fragile even though we like to pretend we are strong.

*applaudes*, well written. Thanks for sharing, and keep writing!

~Anna~ ^_^