M. Edmondson
2007-05-31
ch 1,  | abuseYou spelled tomorrow wrong though I should practice what I preach. Any way this poem was a little emo, though that's what poetry is all about. I'm glad you stretch your legs and writed about other emotions though and your not just focused on sadness and betrayle such things like that. You know when poetry is good when you begin to read it and you feel a rush in your chest. The change, the feeling of the reader being hypnotized by your words. And it seems no matter what style you try you can always change the way I feel in my chest. What I just said was completely platonic. I'm in love with your poetry! |
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