i rely liked it keepit up

this is good, kinda reminda me of a zen thought. good job

Great work...! I loves it... and I WIL upload more of my poems, probably some older ones, from the end of last year even... ones I've written in the past few months... yeah. WILL. Promise!Man your writing is always so good... I like this poem. It's got such a sad nostalgic feeling to it. Beautiful.

Aquila (aka Zamira, now)

I like the contrasts between today and yesterday.

Amazing work, I like this a lot. Keep writing!

Anna _