 Sercus Kaynine 2007-05-23 . chapter 1Ha-ha! Everyone has to let their mind wander every once and a while, right? I'm not much of a drawer, but I like to daydream about the fictional people in my head. They make me laugh.
Oh, and I like to read, too. I love to read. A lot. My teachers get annoyed and tell me to put the book away. And then they say that young people should read more. Weird, no?
Where did the subject of this poem go? I'm digressing again.
However, it was an imaginative poem that you obviously enjoyed writing, though the formatting was a bit strange. O.o
Nice poem, and write on.
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 Jules Kelly 2006-08-03 . chapter 1I love the idea of drawing, and you really seem to know the whole process so very well. And the imagery was also great.
However, I don't like the formatting at all. It would be better with breaks in between stanzas. I was wondering if you had different format for this and fictionpress screwed it up. That's what always happens to me. Anyways, it's still good, but I wish there were breaks in-between stanzas and punctuation at the end of lines. |