O,o
Unexpected!
I love it!
I didn't guess he was dead, that was an awesome twist!

:o

What a cool idea.

This was really well written. (:

Awesome job!

(:

Sorry I didn't offer more feedback and criticism and stuff like that.

I'm just reading this stuff really fast so I can then read more and then be happier and yes I think you know that this is going to a never ending circle so I'm done.

Huh, very interesting... And spooky... Nice work.

...(Big eyes)Doritos...You cease to amaze me...And, who are you talking to?Im being ignored...

-String

That was very impressive...Lol, I thought he was a stalker at first.
Nicely Done.

this is... interesting... I thought at first that he was just a guy at her school... but then he was in her backyard.

Still I didn't figure it out till the end, and I like that.

Cool.

:) CD

Hey.

Okay, I really liked this. Really really really really really really really liked this.

It was absoloutely awesome.

Great job, my lovely Chip Friend.

ME

OMG, that was so good! I almost cried (but not quite- fiction never makes me cry). Hm, title... "Notice" sounds okay to me, I can't think of anything better...