I loved it. Excellent. The effort you put into this was apparent.

hm, well this does describe a hyporcrite... And I do admit that many peaople including many who claim to be followers of Christ. I too have fallen in this category before... But I have changed my ways...(Oh, and the way I do my format, is just to express the words that I feel meaning in..)

I like "molding lies" and "yellow-flaked disdain." This gives a well-phrased illustration of hypocracy. A thought-provoking and imageful piece.

You inspire me! I would've said you complete me or something wierd like that but its way to cheesy and..creepy.Anyway this is a beautiful poem!

i like the message this sends, the bolded words and phrase really adds to it

wow, I love this! It's so powerful and the way you bold and underline certain words to emphasize is excellent. I especially love the last few lines "You used to call it independence—/Now you call it being forgetful./(‘I never really said that, did I?’)" This is great work! :]