I'm so CONFUSED! How come you only have 3 reviews? Your story so far is great and I've only read one chapter. I shocked that there are so few reviews... did you post all the chapters down at once or what? Anyway... I just wanted to say that you've got a good writing style and technique that makes me want to keep reading and reading. Everything flows together perfectly.

Good Job,

stareyed14

DUDE U ROCK! I CRIED LIKE EVERY CHAPTER.. i cant believe u bloody let wayne go.

. ?storyid23974 read my story pleasee

ok, I love you...jk. but seriously, you play halo, you watch red vs blue, and im guessing you read control alt delete occasionally. I love your story, its only too bad i cant find a girl like you...WAH *cries* oh well. anyways, keep up the good story work. later