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| Arrow's Flight 2008-06-09 ch 1,   | Prying your cataracts off may hurt. Nice imagery. So did you find freedom from the blindness? |
| Johnathen Braun 2006-08-04 ch 1, | I like the ongoing references to eyes throughout this poem, the knives beneath the catarcts, blindness, wide eyed. It is a very good theme. |
| stuck here waiting 2006-08-04 ch 1, | Beautiful, but I am sure you hear that all the time. As for Constructive Critiscism...I think there were a few "I"'s that weren't capitalized, other than that a job very well done. The way you put your words together creates a unique flow. Like it, Like it a lot. SHW |