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| shutupcharlotte 2006-08-06 ch 1,  | abusethis is amazing! i find it really hard to write rhyming poems without them sounding contrived. but you've acheived a real flow here, it seems so natural. my favorite lines: "And the entire world is a hooked fishing lure/We’re being reeled in by the mouth" Very clever, sir. |