there's just so much to it! and the way you end it. im just amazed right now...

** georgeous. I am not kidding. The rythm and slant rhymes and everything of this poem is exactly where it is supposed to be. It's as if it was waiting to be written and you read it perfectly. Write more often. I miss your poetry.

The diction in this it amazing. It’s clever, it’s biting, it’s vivid, and it’s completely mesmerizing. I re-read this poem several times before I reviewed – I wanted to make sure I had soaked in every word. Keep up the great work!