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| pixieofdarkness 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abusethis is good, short and too the point, i like. |
| Jen calculates 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuseI love it :) So peaceful. I was a little surprised when it ended. You built up all these images and sounds, and then it just... finished. Especially with 'gone, all gone'. Just seemed a bit sudden. Good job on this though. |
| Gaki Toki 2006-08-04 ch 1, | abuse*with a fake german accent* Interesting...very interesting. Sorry, cute boys on TV, must go watch them...haha. |