hahaha i ove this i know it's not really funny but well it is. anyways...you did a great job capturing karasu-sama's storyline. you have almost the same writing style that i had no idea that it was written by two different authors. (well actually i did because this was on your page but...)

OMG. ^^ I love this! When Raven told me about this, I was like "Hmm...I need to check that out..." She told me it was good and of course she's right! Well, I shall have to make my way to reading more of your stories now. :) Hava nice day,

Kayla =^.^=

I always found the name 'Dr. Strait' to be funny, but now it's even funnier. Haha, awesome work, and not to mention good fanfiction to Karasu-sama's story. Nice job!

Wow! That was an interesting use of the doctor! I think I like it! Well I like anything that can keep my attention, and it's not as easy as you would think! To quote Inuyasha the movie three "You're not bad! I'm amused!" Sorry! I'm an anime techie! LOL!

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!! *dies twenty times, then more* Thank you sososososo much!! *tacklehugglompage*

Gods, you don't know how much this makes me grin :D Wow, I'm pretty much speechless. *SPEECHLESS*

The mention of hide and Shu-chan. Wow. I love both of them (though I don't know too much about hide). Just... I'm so speechless.

I got the author alert for this and I was like *pumps fist in the air* YESH!! YAAY!! *bounces in her seat* I squealed so MUCH when I read this!! You make me so happy!!

I just can't say that enough!!

When you first wrote to tell me that you wanted to write a fanfic from my story I was like, "Wow, she must really like my writing *excited*" And, then, I read this and I'm so... EXCITED!!

Omg, I'm probably babbling *blushblush*

But, thank you so much!! *huggles* ♥♥♥♥♥

I totally didn't even think to pair Riley and Dr. Strait. I'm glad that someone did!! X3

I LOVE the line "Riley suddenly found the name ‘Dr. Strait’ mildly ironic, smiling into the kiss as their tongues danced." Gah, I knew that the name would come in handy one day.

HEHE!! :3

It's sososososo KAWAII!! *dies some more*

SQUEAL!! *tackle hugs you again*

OMG, I'm probably embarrassing myself to the max right now, but I DON'T CARE!!

I am IN DEBT to you, dear!! Whatever you want, I'll give!! :3 This is the BEST gift EVER! XD

Gah, the one thought that keeps running through my head is "THE Ludivine Zephyr wrote ME! a fic"

I think it's safe to say that I love you now~!! :3

Thanks so much, again!! ♥

--Raven

If this is fanfiction, I recomend posting it on fanfiction . net since Fiction Press is for orginal fiction only