Realistic and amusing all at once. I can't wait for you to continue it.

I like it so far. :) I came here because I read your story "We're All Just Stupid People" on Fanfiction--the YukiKyo one?--and ADORED it. Please update soon?

And I agree with you: Haru is MY favorite character, too... Hot, and sweet, too. XD

GO YAOI!!

Great start! Jayden seems like such an intruiging character. But, is Noah really straight? Hm, I should hope not. Can't wait for more!

Great story--and realistic, too! That's a hard thing to find in the slash genre.

Except, usually aren't there policies against guys changing with girls, regardless of sexual preference? There have been too many instances of boys lying about their orientation in order to get with the girls for anyone to really do that--or at least, that's how it is where I live. I don't know...

But I love this story. Noah sounds like a totally cool narrator. I expect a lot of denial and superficial teenaged angst in the future? M, love that stuff...

Left me very curious about what the narrator is talking about. I like the style. The narrator is somewhat mean and sarcastic without being annoying, which is a thin line to walk. Nicely written.

"That person who you wouldn’t lend a hand to, even if someone was threatening to e-mail all of your friends and family pictures of you from last year’s Christmas party when you were drunk and modeling your girlfriend’s bikini." :D

I like this story a lot. It's very well written and amusing. There was another line I liked, but I've forgotten it... Anyway, excellent! Continue!