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| Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abuseI agree - amusing image if taken literally. I like both sides of this poem - the metaphorical and literal. Very sarcastic and passionate. |
| moonsliver86 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abusethere's something about this haiku that makes it different from the ones i've read today... it's cynical but not too the point of sounding critical; it has depth but not to the point that you find yourself stuck in a loop... all i can say is that i liked it but am not really sure why... |
| Kusje 2006-08-05 ch 1, | abuseI like this taken literally :D |