|Reviews for just so freaking funny|
| Flies 9/4/06 . chapter 1
I think what I like about this poem is the fact you lay out a domino affect, then explain how it cannot be picked up "in that order", and then give it sort of a personal twist. It's a basic, but powerful, way of writing, and your choice of topic is personal, honest and gut-twisting. Marvelous work.
| ash the arsnist 8/25/06 . chapter 1
this was well-worded && i love how it made me feel almost helpless, good write