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| the Berserker 2007-06-13 ch 1,  | abuseThis is in return for reviewing Clubbing at Fifteen, for which I am eternally grateful :D I don't really understand why you put this story in your profile, too. It's a shame 'cause I read your profile first, so this is exactly the same... Too short, and I don't think you understand the benefits of a comma, but not too bad. A good idea, you just didn't write it to the effect I expected of the plotline. Still, I like it :) |
| beloved18 2006-09-19 ch 1, | abusei cant think of anything to write at the moment eh-,-' my mind is lank -,-' sorry ! |