Sorry its taken me so long to review but everything I open a browser it quits. It's getting really annoying. Anyway, I'm glad you've finally updated! I hope you continue to do so, and even though I've already read the beginning, and I've told you what I thought of it, I still really like this!

Hi! i really like the story so far! tis an awesome idea. keep up the good work! ^^

btw now many blondes are in this story? it was kinder hard to keep track of each one @.@

hi hi! i love u! yay more story!!

Hehe, wow! What a cool idea for a story! Hope that you continue it! I've added you to my author alerts, so I can read it if you do! Keep up the fantastic work! ~Eric

Hey,

I really hope that you do continue with this story b/c it sounds really interesting. So have fun with it and even if you decide not to do more, the first chapter is awesome.

i really like the start, but i would put more spaces between the paragraphs cause the letters are so small it's a bit tyring ^^;; but i loved it!! very nice narrative and description!