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Vivi 2006-12-02 . chapter 2
>.< This is Hilarious. I especially like the main character... Too funny. Update soon, please??
TheGreenLantern 2006-10-29 . chapter 2
Another hilarious chapter. I'm quite amused by the fact that she doesn't seem terribly bothered by the fact she's been abducted by aliens, and that the alien, singular, is a bumbling, incompetent fool.
There was one thing that confused me:

"Cerbes sat on the one beside me, giving me a suspicious, sideways glance as he grabbed the helicopter-like controls and began to steer the ship steadily towards Erf.

“Well, ‘Smutt’. I am Cerbes..."

How did she know his name before he told her? I was slightly confused.

Other than that, quite fabulous.

-Angie
Chocolate Trifle 2006-10-29 . chapter 2
OhMyGosh! This is hilarious!
I love the characters, especially Smutt. They're all very unique. Eccentric too, but hey, who cares? xD
Update soon!
TheGreenLantern 2006-10-29 . chapter 1
Wow. This was amazing. I love the orginiality of it, and can't wait to read this rest. I especially like how you take time through "pausing" to explain things. It's very well done. The character of Smutt reminds me so much of myself-the way she talks and such.
-Angie
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