 TheGreenLantern 2006-10-29 . chapter 2Another hilarious chapter. I'm quite amused by the fact that she doesn't seem terribly bothered by the fact she's been abducted by aliens, and that the alien, singular, is a bumbling, incompetent fool.
There was one thing that confused me:
"Cerbes sat on the one beside me, giving me a suspicious, sideways glance as he grabbed the helicopter-like controls and began to steer the ship steadily towards Erf.
“Well, ‘Smutt’. I am Cerbes..."
How did she know his name before he told her? I was slightly confused.
Other than that, quite fabulous.
-Angie |