Really cute start. Sad about the crushing-spirit part, especially well written/described there. Interesting to see where this will go.

That's so sad! I'd love to read more! lol.

you ever get the feeling that so many children are mentally damaged by their parents that it is almost irreversable to a point.

i always think to the future, i mean, not 10 or 11, but highschool and college wise

depression, anxiety, pent-up aggression. who knows.

Wow. This is touching. You captured the emotion perfectly.

"'Here.' Billy said sadly, stepping down the front steps and to his mother’s car, the lights in his Spiderman shoes giving out pathetic flashes of light with each step." This is a perfect line. It made it seem even more real.

~Elenive