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| merrymowmow 2007-03-04 ch 10,  | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update. |
| Deafgurl's world 2007-02-01 ch 10, | abuseHey wow...adam and jessica finally meet why does jessica freak out when she saw adam? Why can't she walk toward him and slap on adam's cheek realises what he done to her? Hurry update soon. |
| uggabugga 2007-01-06 ch 10, | abusesend me an e-mail please and update soon! =) |
| princess max 2007-01-04 ch 10, | abuseAmanda, Amanda, Amanda! Why do I get the feeling this will lead somewhere? Trick will surely disappear. Adam and Jess, though...I think they're destined for each other. |
| Matias 2007-01-04 ch 10, anon. | abusePor Dios Dani! Que ya se hablen, quiero ver que es lo que tienen por hablar aun. Argh me mata tener que esperar. Amanda de verdad engaño a Trick? No puedo creerlo, no me suena muy de ella. Aunque si puede ser que se viera aburrida o atraada en la relacion y eso la llevara a hacerlo. O capaz se siente dejada de lado... no se, estoy chamuyando jajaja Ciertamente me encanta como esta quedando y pls escribi o subi el otro capi ya! besotes! |
| Lucy! 2007-01-03 ch 10, anon. | abuseah mierda quiero mas! otra vez lo dejas asi! dany seriamente me vas a infartar! te juro en este momento tengo mas intriga x trick y amanda q por jess y adam, i mean todavia quiero saber q pasas, peor tambien quiero ver como reacciona trick si es q amanda le dice! ademas quiero saber copmo siente amanda lo que pasa, si el chico este le gusta de verdad o just one night stand ah YA TE SENTAS A ESCRIBIR EL SIGUIENTE CHAP! love you! |
| lucy! 2007-01-03 ch 9, anon. | abuseman no habia visto el chap este modificado! me gusta mucho mas, el final dejas intriga con todo! con amanda, con Jess y adam. Me da pena q veo unos cuernos enormes en el futuro de trick *pout* anyway no puedo esperar hasta cuando Jessica conozca a Josh jejeje |
| aferdeity 2007-01-03 ch 10, | abusehehe some idot huh? but its his idiot! finaly! |
| princess max 2006-12-17 ch 9, anon. | abuseyou can relaly tell when you don't enjoy writing something! lol @ Trick, though. 'not a cat person' = I don't blame him. |
| damn well know who i'm chea... 2006-12-15 ch 9, anon. | abusethat's it! you keep cheating on my! and i thought you loved me... stupid naive lucy. i would say that i love this story and that i can't wait to read what happens next with jess*/adam/josh, but i won't. all of those other readers you cheat me with can tell you so. igual para q sepas me gusto como va la historia y espero no tardes tanto en update it. love you so much! |
| merrymowmow 2006-12-09 ch 8, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update. |
| Deafgurl's world 2006-11-16 ch 8, | abusehey. I feel sorry for Jessica remember about her sweet son that she lost it. How cute that Trick and Amanda were together. Hurry update soon. |
| mich mich 2006-10-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseI can beta for any story that needs to be beta-ed O.o; if that's the right word to use lawl. My chappie is almost done -whines- so don't kill me yet! |
| Sam 2006-10-24 ch 8, anon. | abuseThank you for answering my request! This thing call writer's block are evil so I hope it doesn't come back. Wow, Trick is so domesicated, haha. I hope Jessica get out of the mood she is in and maybe try to meet new people or something. Amanda pretty much know Jessica. With this chapter Adam has finally revealed how ashamed he is of the person who he use to be. Good thing too. Thanks for updating. |
| princess max 2006-10-23 ch 8, | abuseI'm so glad Nina had her own happy ending. Man, I love huge hardware stores. I could spend many hours and $$s there. Damn Adam;) |