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| TheCresentMoonWriter 2008-09-22 ch 1,  | abuseWow. I so... loved this. It was great. I didn't really see many mistakes either. This was brilliant. I loved it. And though it is only a one shot this deserves to go onto my favorites list. |
| Electric Colours 2008-07-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was just beautiful. :] I don't think I have ever read a story like before. |
| Elkica 2008-04-10 ch 1, | abuseThat was... just wow. |
| AfterPartyFiasco 2008-03-31 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Full of emotion. =) |
| Gun 2 the Heart 2008-03-02 ch 1, | abuseamazing one-shot. Very lovely and great work =) |
| firestar267 2007-12-01 ch 1, | abuseLoved every word of it. |
| HaPpYGuRl 2007-11-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseI dont know how to react to this...for some strange reason,there are tears in my eyes now...it's left me speechless! |
| j.d. egan 2007-10-08 ch 1, | abuseHey! This is one of the most touching and moving stories I've ever read. My kind of story. You know, one guy being disliked and plain-lloking, and the other so popular and beautiful. And, then the latter falling for the former. It's just so moving and romantic. I planned to make one similar to this, but since you'd already written one I think I have to carefully write my own. I don't wanna be tagged as a COPYCAT. Anyway, great story. Love it! |
| Jacoby.Rae.Grace 2007-10-07 ch 1, | abuseI love it. All of it. Bravo. chek it, JRG |
| Tom 2007-07-04 ch 1, anon. | abuseWonderful. You always write beautiful stories! |
| HarderToBreathe... 2007-05-24 ch 1, anon. | abusea very rich plot. but the way you described donnie wasn't as pleasant. i mean everyone has a good feature on thereselves. being never beautiful is impossible for me. deafness and blindness is the way to go to romance. richard being black and donnie being white made me ercall of this show in called "madtv" the have this part where there is this couple white and black. and the girl was a discriminating bitch...hahha the show is called "INSIE LOOKING OUT" hahaha i just shared it... |
| Kieriko 2007-05-07 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful story. |
| ess3sandra 2007-05-02 ch 1, | abusedamn girl, that was beatiful, my first slash stroy i have ever read. sweet! as in nice. well, good job i say, and also that donnie was mute, it took it to another level. |
| Renzie 2007-04-26 ch 1, | abuseLove this < 3 |
| Nadeena 2007-04-19 ch 1, | abuseOh, that's so sweet and moving, but still feels very real. I love this story. |