this was just beautiful...i must say, that i really like your work, and i hardly ever read poetry, and those i do, at the most i think are ok or pretty good maybe, but this i actually do like! and quite a lot too...i love your free form raw emotion that isn't afraid to speak the truth. adding to favories :)

I think the style is imaginative.. but I guess that's just me you don't have to listen to me. I like FOB so ya know. But I like this and how you've portrayed what you're trying to put out. Great job.

I don't like the Fall-Out-Boy style too much to begin with.

I did like this poem, though; it was mocking that style in an interesting way. Great job!

I loved this, it was so wonderfully written. And I completely agree with you about that syle being overdone, and I like how your poem kind of made fun of it. Anyways, great work!