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Oh wow, the last part really surprised me. My eyes, which were like: -.- (well, you know, normally open) before I read the last line. They really got big.

Aww man, I've felt that before. I mean, I can draw pretty decent, but when I look at others, I feel the exact same thing, like the main character did! XD

For some reason, I usually portray these nameless characters as male.

Good job!

~ASK~

Hi =]T'is your slash buddy, hehe.I loved this, thoughIt was written very nicely ^-^

...Wow. I can't even tell you how many times this has happened to me. I mean, not the suicide part at the end, but I've always wished I could draw. When I look at stuff that other people did, it...it makes me furious. That sounds bad, but it's true.

The main character? I identify with her (her?) so very well it's sickening. Dude, I could sure tell some stories...but then I'd take up all the space on your lovely reviews page.

This at-first-glance-unassuming work has really made me feel all warm and comfortable inside, to let me know that other people feel the same way I do. Great job on this!

One thing you could do is at the end give the perspective of the girl. Just to round it off. Might add something that it seems to miss. Apart from that it's good.

I like it, but you've got a lot of parts where you show and don't tell. Try to change the wording of some of the sentences with a verb that is a form of "be" in them. You'll come out with something a little more interesting. Example: "Her hair was blonde" becomes "Blonde curls fell to her shoulders", or something like that. Still good, however. Don't cave. It was good.

I don't really understand... but I get the feelings meant in it, I think.

Like, the person who's drawings are lousy had some sort of precognition about the other, like... they had a gift and were troubled by it...

Or something. I guess I'm just weird... ^^

Whoa, that one really caught me off-guard. I totally didn't expect those last two lines.I saw the narrarator as a male until I read the end, and the re-read it. My compliments, it's rare to get a double-take at the computer screen from me. Ha ha.