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| katy 2006-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is really amazing. love the metaphors. beautiful x |
| Tammz 2006-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abuse(i dont wana swear haha this sounds a little posh for me) but ge wizz! gal your tallents are endless! =] i love it. your descripting words are blates perfect! and i like the way you described her as the salt we are stuck in =] miss you poppet x |
| Sarah 2006-09-01 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is really good. shame you don't have anymore stories up. x |
| mattyno11 2006-08-30 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat stuff. write more. |
| Tom =] 2006-08-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseA++ |
| dihagwdfkh 2006-08-17 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good |
| yeah_yeah_no 2006-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abusei think that this story is really good. you've given you characters so much life and reality by not making them perfect, and i think by not having much of a story within it it helps you concentrate on the characters and their relationships. love it. |
| Rach 2006-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseur amazing at writing stories! wish i was as gud! what happened 2 ur other story? x ps i'm sure ive heard the grace of a centipede with ninety-eight missing legs sumwhere b4 lol x |
| Gezza 2006-08-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love this story. write more. |
| georgie 2006-08-12 ch 1, anon. | abusethis is a ** ace description. it could be longer though, you know more story, but maybe that would actually detract from it. |
| bugeyyyyyyz 2006-08-10 ch 1, anon. | abusei think this is amazing. i would. lol! i added you on myspace ;) |
| clare 2006-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abusewowza that awesome, your use of imagery is amazing, i loved it, you should continue it. =) |
| unfit_for_survey 2006-08-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseso what... she's a crack **? i love how you can say all this horrible stuff about her, but because you've written it in the second person, you can make it so the reader will still think she's attractive. it's very clever. well done. kudos to you. |
| Sami 2006-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abusebloody good! |
| Carl 2006-08-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseman, she sounds disgusting and yet like... really hot. I love how the words you use make that happen. this ** is great |