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The Fourth Fate
2006-08-06
ch 1,
abuseOMG. That's really scary. Is he really dead?! OMG. That's SO creepy. ACK. Even if he isn't...chilling metaphor. OMG. I love how it's the sequal and it's so final... My love is: OFFLINE. Like the caps make it seem like forever. I really like it. I feel like some of it rhymed where as some parts didn't... But that's okay. I thought it worked really well. Bravo.
Elspeth Setzer
2006-08-06
ch 1, anon.
abuseomg, I'm so sorry! i hope that one day the pain will lessen. if you ever want to talk to a perfect stranger about it, just email me, okay?
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