This is so sad. Well written piece. Original work.

~Twilight Starr~

Also beautifully written. Keep writing.

I like this alot, though i get a little lost in it. The discriptions are, as in the rest of your work, amazing, but the meaning isn't so clear.I still rather like it though.

The ending sold me. It's a perfect match for the overall piece. I also love the word manipulation of '(k)nights'. Nicely done.

the style is awesomethe wordingeverything i like