i enjoyed that!

Like it so far,although you should've mentioned it was a sequel in the beginning or in the description.I suppose I'll go read the first one and catch myself up.Then I shall continue on with this story.

a bit better in this chapter.

very rushed... lacks emotion... lust talking and then more talking...

"May I hug your daughter in fron of you?"??!! what's this? the dark ages? It's not only unrealistic given present times, it's fanatic... really not a positive message to send to young people out there, I understand the "non pre-marital sex" issue and the "non-fondling issue" but human contact outside one's family is necessary to develop social skills and learning to defend oneself. Considering present times it's unsafe for a person, especially a girl, not to know from experience ANYTHING at all about mass behavior.

heya, this is a great story. i really like this series with all the cousins and stuff. cya later ~ Alenor.

Amazing story. I could not seem to pull muself away from reading it. I think I sat here for an hour and a half digesting all that you wrote. I applaud you. Good job.

This story absolutely rocks. Unlike most of the stories out there, it wasn't all smut and it actually had religion incorporated in. Very good job.

This is beyond beautiful and utterly touching, I absolutely love it!

im not usually religious. believe me, im an atheist. but this story is touching. a little unrealistic at times but i liked it either way. way to write!

yes! good ending

very cute couples

No!

cute but his father, he hit him again...

cool!

how dare his father hit him? And daniel oh how could he? men, i love this story