Reviews for Of Swords and Spirits: Collision of Destiny

thunderbolt and lightning 2006-08-15 ch 1,	abuseoh and i think it should be on here
thunderbolt and lightning 2006-08-15 ch 3,	abusethat was much better there are still a few mistakes here and there but nothing really big your going to have to go more in to Bahamut being king i don't really understand that i hope you finish this story i really like it
thunderbolt and lightning 2006-08-06 ch 2,	abuseIf there is two people writing a story you really should make sure that your staying in the same tense as the other writer because one of you is writing in past tense and the other in present or one of you is doing both but you should really watch that.