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Reviews For: The Desert Rain

NewAgeRembrandt 2007-05-02 ch 1,	abuseYour reviews of my story have compelled me to sign back in to Ficpress and update (which I will do shortly - tomorrow ish I guess). But anyway, I didn't realize at first that you were the person who wrote this! I read it a while ago and never reviewed (yeah, I'm on of THOSE people - at least, when I'm feeling lazy). But I liked/like it. A lot. You made it original (the ending was perfect). And your style is excellent. (:
Lady E 2007-04-29 ch 1,	abuseA rare gem; I love this. Your writing flowed and molded, harnessing the narrator's thoughts into a bizarrely sad yet adorable perspective. One can't help feeling terrible for the poor man, child-like in his blindness and ignorance, and just terribly helpless for the whole situation as it is. A magnificent portrayal, one I will have to favorite. I think I've read some of your RuroKen fanfictions some years ago. "History Behind a History," right?
Amindaya 2007-04-15 ch 1,	abuseWow. The whole time, I was thinking: that poor guy, this is't going to end how he wants it to. And then it didn't. So sad.
Kirsten Nussey 2007-03-22 ch 1,	abuseI was amazed at how naive he was, even as an adult...but it was good nonetheless and made it all the more ... I don't really know what word i'm looking for but definately something positive. I wish this wasn't a oneshot and that it continued... i'd love to read more about Snow and his "stalker" hehe.
Patient607-9912 2006-10-01 ch 1,	abuseThat was awesome! Snow kiks *! Too bad it had to end like that :( sad* But Cool! I likes your writing.
random 2006-08-26 ch 1, anon.	abusegreat writing, great story, very cool ending. Especially your end message..."Snow does it, therefore it's cool. So there." HAHA! That was great.I loved the descriptions and the pacing, though sometimes you went too in depth to what the dude was thinking that it got a bit dry and boring several times (in fact, I skipped some parts and found that I didn't really need to read them anyway, since I was able to understand the situation clearly from the later descriptions). I'm not trying to bash your writing r anything, just giving some advice, because overall you're pretty good at describing minute things that make this story believable (i.e. the pink umbrella). keep up the cool work.
Luciver 2006-08-13 ch 1,	abuseWonderful. Absolutely wonderful. And a tad bit heart breaking too. Snow...they could have a happy ending, ya know. Although the narrator must have just seemed like an obsessed innocent to Snow. Very sad. But, great job. I'm going to go read your other stories now.
SerialXLain 2006-08-06 ch 1,	abuse:hugs you hard: OH MY GOODNESS! This made my night. ;-; I love you. And I love Snow. The whole time I just kept thinking that he probably had no feelings attatched at all...I mean he's a prostitute. I like how the narrator had that kind of stalker appeal to him...the watching and the jealousy and planning a future for the two of them... I was amazed at how naive he is. :shakes head: Your ending made me feel that pressured feeling in my head...the one where I want to cry. XD Thanks a bunch pshaw. Overall: this was so pretty and emotional and I love you. You're my hero. LOVE!
Marylyn-Mercy 2006-08-06 ch 1,	abuseVery nicely written!!
maho.shojo 2006-08-06 ch 1, anon.	abuseIs there more to this?? o_Ohaha, glad you advocate safe sex.

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