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Graphi
2006-08-08
ch 1, anon.
abuseIt's short and sweet. The fact that you used one of my favorite Frou Frou songs earns you points too. ^.^ I like it, but I felt like it was missing something, though I've no idea what. :/ I still love howfar your style has come since we first started talking. *huggle*
xanthofile
2006-08-06
ch 1,
abuseah, i loved this! i wish i could know what sort of happened in the two years, other than they just...drifted away(?). at least, i assume that that's what happened here?

the clearing was pretty vivid, i liked that. especially corin's impression the second time, how the sight left a bitter taste in his mouth.

all in all...yeah, pretty decent, yo! and i'm looking forward to the upcoming fics you mentioned. good luck writing.
magalina
2006-08-06
ch 1,
abuseThat was nice... kind of sad :( It all happened really fast! I wanted to keep reading!
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