 Graphi 2006-08-08 . chapter 1 It's short and sweet. The fact that you used one of my favorite Frou Frou songs earns you points too. ^.^ I like it, but I felt like it was missing something, though I've no idea what. :/ I still love howfar your style has come since we first started talking. *huggle* |
 xanthofile 2006-08-06 . chapter 1ah, i loved this! i wish i could know what sort of happened in the two years, other than they just...drifted away(?). at least, i assume that that's what happened here?
the clearing was pretty vivid, i liked that. especially corin's impression the second time, how the sight left a bitter taste in his mouth.
all in all...yeah, pretty decent, yo! and i'm looking forward to the upcoming fics you mentioned. good luck writing. |