i like the last line.~Liz

i like this as well, as to be expected. but yeah, times change and the now becomes the past. really good piece, but i think the last line needs to be changed perhaps, just seems wrong to me, but what do i know? thanks on the comments, peace

Very nicely done! This poem fits my mood right now, I'm leaving the state for college. I think it speaks to anyone who is having to make a change, however. Great piece!

Wow, I really got a "The time has come, the Walrus said, to talk of many things..." feeling when I read this. I like it! :)

The beginning feels a bit like Lewis Carroll which I enjoy, so nice poem. Good time for a beginning.

I love poems that have a point and make sense. You're telling the reader something, but you did it in a stylized way. Takes skill, pal. U got it :-D