Oh wow, I like this fairytale. It's definitely going on my story alert list. It reminds me of cecilia dart thornton's Bitterbynde trilogy...You should read it...

More please??

I think this is a really good start and it has a lot of potental. Keep up the good work!

I really like this idea. It's far from cliche and if it goes where I think it may, I'm definetly going to adore this.

Impressive story. This shows a lot of promise. I think there might be connection between the grandmother and the elves.

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