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fivestar ice 2008-05-05 ch 16,	abuseI can't believe you haven't gotten more reviews. I really like your writing style and just everything about this story. Although I'm hoping that the kiss with the leprauchan is really sucking the gold out of his 'stomach' or you need to kiss someone to get the gold...I hope I can find out soon!
theapathycrusade 2008-04-30 ch 2,	abuseHaha, wow! I so didn't expect the vampires XD lol, I love it. And Damon's POV is just hilarious, I like his, "He didn’t even know she went to school here? How could he miss her?" Kyuu sounds amazing (and thanks for sounding it out for us - I wasn't sure how to pronounce it, but I like it. It always drives me nuts when I don't know how to pronounce a name in a book, so, yeah, awesome) As usual, your details kick **. The Mary Janes, ribbon around her neck, "raccoon like eye makeup". You can really see her, and I think that's brilliant. I bow down to you!
theapathycrusade 2008-04-30 ch 1,	abuseYour details are AMAZING. I want to post replies on every chapter...so I'm rereading it all. Can I just say : "blooming starbursts of violet" "cracking against the sidewalk like an egg against the edge of a mixing bowl." "He decided to befriend me, and volunteered to join me in my crowd of one." That last one - it's just, 'my crowd of one' - I love that. I don't even LIKE guys in skirts, but Tate is captivating, just like you said. You write so eloquently and descriptively, it's compulsive, the need to keep reading. And I LOVE LOVE LOVE the twist - he can take of himself! I really love that, because I don't usually see it...this is excellent. I'm impressed. Yada yada, I worship your writing. :) Onward to chapter 2!
windy girl 2008-01-05 ch 3,	abuseI was initially going to leave you a review every few chapters, and basically recap my thoughts. But I loved this chapter so much, especially the first and second paragraph, so I'm going to leave you one now. You write so prettily. It's kinda like poetic prose (which is my favorite). And like I said earlier, it feels natural, so when you add those descriptions in, it actually flows. I was pathetically happy when you mentioned Newton. I like to think that I retained something during physical science, and lo and behold, I did. I shouldn't be this happy over this, but I am. Oh well. And Tate sounds pretty when he dances. I love all the littles things you added in here, especially the faeries. -max
pero-pero 2008-01-04 ch 16,	abusemy gawd. i've been waiting for this! i've always love hane and for you to write about hane and tate! yay!
windy girl 2008-01-03 ch 1,	abuseSo, um. I clicked on this by accident, and I was going to go back because I don't really care for fantasy, but I think I fell in love with that first sentence. And then you described the skirt (which sounds so pretty), and I had to read the rest. Your description of this boy is amazing to me. I usually don't like descriptions all in one place because I just don't know, but it was nice here. Your writing seems very natural. -max
pero-pero 2007-09-23 ch 15,	abusethis story deserves more than a thousand reviews! you've written is so beautifully. i'm in awe. chapter every chapter, very original. never tire reading it. is like transcending and watching your characters in an another world where Tate and Damon is at. vert poetic. plus, you'r syntax is superb. please i beg you... complete this story. it would be such a waste if left hanging. depresses me.
Insaneagram 2007-09-15 ch 15,	abuseThis story is beautiful, I love your descriptions and the magic of it all. I was looking at the character descriptions on your profile page and I looked at Tate's and clciked the youtube link to the song that was there and than when I looked at the video I noticed it was from Bleach and I was just watching an episode of Bleach while reading this. Lol I just found that funny.
obsidiandreams 2007-07-09 ch 15,	abusesquishes Tate until there is nothing left of him but goo Uh... oops?
BrokenandBleeding 2006-11-28 ch 14,	abuseTT^TT Oh Tate... Heart-warming/touching Excellent job, as usual! Love the outbust in the middle x3 go Damon!
fantasyfaery 2006-11-27 ch 14,	abuseAnother brillant chapter! I really hope poor ole D's gonna get something for his patience. Waiting for the next one.
obsidiandreams 2006-11-26 ch 14,	abuseWeheya! Tate is so cute! squishes him
Orangeena 2006-11-26 ch 14,	abuseAlerts are back! This chapter was great. I am so proud of Damon! He is passive, especially with Tate, but he's beginning to realize that he does deserve a bit more from him. I mean, obviously he's in love with him and it's got to be hard as hell to feel so strongly about someone and yet, feel like you don't really know them at all. I'm curious as to why Tate won't allow a sexual relationship between them. The nightmare could be a clue - maybe he thinks that getting too close would allow Damon to get hurt in some way. Maybe something in his past has made him reluctant to get too close with anybody. But I do agree with Damon.. four years of friendship and their feelings haven't subsided, so why try to suppress it? Cheers, update soon!
BrokenandBleeding 2006-11-08 ch 13,	abuseSorry it took so long to read an rate-- WOW!! XD GO TATE GO!!
Orangeena 2006-10-18 ch 1,	abuseHey, thanks for the review reply :) and to answer your question, yes the story is ambiguous, and it is clear that you meant it to be that way. What would be odd is if your intentions were not for things to be at least a bit fuzzy. As for it being too ambiguous? For my tastes, in the beginning it was to some extent, but we've gotten to know Tate a bit more since then, and I wouldn't say that now. If anything, it just seems that Tate may be leading Damon on a bit- I mean, I really don't think he is blind to Damon's feelings for him, so why go all this time without letting him know he feels the same? However, I think that's just something we readers will have to wait for you to reveal. Going by your style thus far, I don't anticipate finding out anytime terribly soon, but I know you won't disappoint us. Cheers!

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