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Twilight Starr 2007-11-30 . chapter 1
Great title. I like the way you worded things. For example, "but she's just playing acrobatics with your heart." Nice work.

~Twilight Starr~
Chaos Apple 2006-08-08 . chapter 1
This hits too close to home...-

I love what you do with your formatting.
smile persephone 2006-08-06 . chapter 1
This poem doesn't appear to have an ending. When I finished it, I expected there to be something more. I like the childlike vibe of the piece, though. It portrays a side of the relationship that I find most interesting.
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