Reviews for cotton candy dreams

Twilight Starr 2007-11-30 ch 1,	Great title. I like the way you worded things. For example, "but she's just playing acrobatics with your heart." Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~
Chaos Apple 2006-08-08 ch 1,	This hits too close to home...- I love what you do with your formatting.
smile persephone 2006-08-06 ch 1,	This poem doesn't appear to have an ending. When I finished it, I expected there to be something more. I like the childlike vibe of the piece, though. It portrays a side of the relationship that I find most interesting.