oh how sad!! that was really wonderful!

very good, i like the metaphor, and this means alot to me in many dofferent ways.

Poor man.

Aww, this is so cute. Beautifully done. Loved it. Keep it up.

Normally I don't read haikus due to some comprehension problem within me, or possibly the ones I've read in the past, but this one was beautiful in its shortness.