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TiggerGurl 2009-11-01 . chapter 26
YAY ADORABLE! How many pages is this story if i may ask?
cups.of.coffee 2009-10-25 . chapter 22
there is the scene i was waiting for xD
cups.of.coffee 2009-10-25 . chapter 18
its chapter freaking 18 and no mad steamy kissing scene yet?!?!
jk jk XD
Good job so far, still got like seven chapters left though xD
ShadowBrilliance 2009-08-12 . chapter 26
Ahh! I loved this story, I almot cried at chapter 25! So happy! Thanks for writing, and don't forget to check out my story, reveiw! Lolrotf, love your writing, seriously, AMAZING!
jollz 2009-04-28 . chapter 8
Oh my good the approval thing was just so funny! Awesome story!
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 26
hmm so no presidencie...so its up to us to imagine if he gets to be president or not. I really liked the whole epilogue with their at home scene. Well he is like me in the baking department...i can cook but i can´t bake anything except pizza (Homemade one). I also liked their banter about who is smarter. It was also a good touch that you let them doubt their relationship at one point, it makes them more real, but also good that the couldn´t be without each other. They really banter like and old married couple!^^ The scene in wich he says lets have ten children, is just funny.
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 25
Yay! she is Back! *gives-little-miss-angel-a bear hug* I so like it that she is is back. I´m happy that they could see the sense in her being on earth...well so i guess i was right about the first lady. I got an idea that if they were together he would call her angel. So needles to say i liked the ending of the chapter. i liked the scene with Dario, that "Dude, you never told me how hot she was" had me grinning, i got the first idea that she could be back, when i read this. So Bob also is going to go to his love...good. The scene where he talks to his friends while he was down was good also it showed really good how down he was. Good Chapter and Good story...now on the epilogue.
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 24
Sins? Sins are so overated! I don´t believe in them...yeah i´m a protestant so i don´t believe in hell either!^^ I like that scene with the both Archangels. Hmm so he has a skeleton in his Closet too. Hmm why do they want to make her an archangel?

No! She won´t come back? What that is soo unfair of them! I know this wasn´t reasonable but i hoped for a happy ending...i´m sad right now.
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 23
Oh i simply like the Lorna parts! I think they´re maybe my favourite parts of the whole story. I liked her conversation with Aurora in the Library, how she doesn´t give up until the truth comes out and how she cares. And i like the scene with her, Dario and Eric how she eggs him on.
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 22
So the first kiss...finally you did let us wait for some sweet time now. Hmm yeah i can understand how Aurora is conflicted. I really liked the scene in wich they talk about her brothers...it has a lot of depth and makes her believeable. Hmm is that problem out of erics family, due to the defeat of the evils?
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 21
What the heck? Jensen Undermeyer is on of the Devils Cohorts? And Aurora being somebody who died? Its only logical somehow. I really liked the part with her little brother being that perceptive about Eric. I also Like Lorna she is a good friend. Hehe Lorna and Aurora having a girl talk...that should be interesting.
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 18
Haha i soo like lorna! Her conversation/argument with Aurora was soo great! Lorna brings a whole new level of fun into this story. The Chapter ending was good also. Hehe whats going on with this two...i´ve got a strong feeling about who is going to be the first lady.^^
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 17
Oi Oi i like Lorna! She is really Quirky! Hmm what is going to happen to Anna and Edwin? I liked Auroras and Erics conversation when they steppen in on Lorna and Dario. And yes Eric is presidential material with the way he helps people...atleast the kind of president you would wish for. Also their Conversation on Auroras Matchmaker attempts is very good.
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 15
I really really like Lornas and Auroras Conversations. Hmm i don´t know about that Dario...strange guy...very strange. Not for coming for help but i somehow don´t get him. The scene where Lorna gives Aurora ideas about Jackson and mrs. Smits is just too good.*lol* Oh Lorna don´t go for Jayden, i don´t like him.
LupusAries 2009-03-08 . chapter 14
This Story is soo funny! I really liked the conversation between Lorna and Aurora. Her "you naughty little angel" had me cracking up. Hmm just what i´m thinking about...what about Dario? Is hee good, bad and why can he see aurora. Mediums, Angels? this gets interesting.
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