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Reviews For: Marionettes and Figurines

poet tree
2006-11-29
ch 1,
abuseElegant. I really like the rhyme scheme here, especially the internal rhymes. I like the ending the best.
dollface and her cancer
2006-08-08
ch 1,
abusei would very much love to hear this read in your voice, just to see what these slanting, jamming rhymes would actually sound like. i have a tendency to think this a lot when reading your work. it all has splendid rhythm.
Technical-Difficulties
2006-08-07
ch 1,
abusei liked the ryhming. and it dtill made sense.
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