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| poet tree 2006-11-29 ch 1, | abuseElegant. I really like the rhyme scheme here, especially the internal rhymes. I like the ending the best. |
| dollface and her cancer 2006-08-08 ch 1, | abusei would very much love to hear this read in your voice, just to see what these slanting, jamming rhymes would actually sound like. i have a tendency to think this a lot when reading your work. it all has splendid rhythm. |
| Technical-Difficulties 2006-08-07 ch 1, | abusei liked the ryhming. and it dtill made sense. |