Just incredible, the way that entire poem was full of beautiful images. One after another, first the crane, then the music...one of my favourites.

Oh, this is beautiful. I love the first four lines.

That is beau-ti-ful!

This is so beautiful. I love how the poem swells its lines and leaves the reader near breathless. Simply lovely.

marie

PS: First attempt at obeying the parameters of iambic pentameter.

Excellent sound. I like the texture of this. Very dream-like and etheral. Great work.

I'm just getting back to writing and reviewing here again, I noticed you had reviewed something of mine a long time ago, so I decided to come back and it made me happy as I've been reading a great deal of stuff these past few days and nothing has satisfied me. However, then I started with this and joy sauntered back into my heart. Nicely titled. And I just enjoyed reading this. It's short with a nice flow, easy on my senses.

this is pure enjoyment. it's so whimsical you can treasure it and read it again and again. bravo. ~*L

Wow! You definitely have a talent for adding a touch of fantasy to your art. This had a lovely fairy tale feel to it..quite charming, to be honest.

Love it.

Just so pretty and fantastic.

Lovely.

~* Noelle

has that sort of dreamy appeal. i really like it, especially those last two lines.

some of the period placements make it sound awkward though and it is a bit too repetitive for its own good.

but the words are still, breathtaking

I love the whimsical feel of this piece. The imagery reminds me of a fairy tale. Nicely written!