Really nice poem. Well-written, to the point without using fluffy words that are too long and unecessary (I hate it when people do that). Good job!
~Anna
P.S.-Please DO look at my poems if you have the time.

hello there. you reviewed one of my stories so i'll review one of your works. Wonderful poem, keep up the good work

This is a good poem.

^_^ i liked this poem a lot! ^_^ and i'm glad i could inspire you!

~rira-chan