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| Arafax 2006-11-29 ch 1,  | abuseNice poem...the wording was very well done...I agree with the other reviewers, you have a way with words. |
| Arutha 2006-09-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is awesomeness, as usual my dear! Your similes and metaphors present the most amazing and symbolic images I've ever seen in your writing. I'm blown away by a few of them, greedy mouths and sand sifting through fingers to name a few. And furthermore I dig the fact that this poem does such a great job of getting to the core of what so many people are actually going through right now. By the way, I'm impressed that you found something of mine that you hadn't read yet ;P I haven't received a fictionpress review in ages - I haven't even written a new poem in an eon, hehe. As usual, keep it up, girl! You dah boss ;D |
| simpleplan13 2006-09-01 ch 1, | abuseI love the description of suffocation.. powerful and beautifully written... the ending was very sweet, but not quite as powerful as the rest of the piece |
| Moon-Chaser 2006-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, I can relate to it. I have a friend who is like that. Keep it up. Thanks for reviewing |