 artificial destiny 2009-03-19 . chapter 2nice. why not update? |
 artificial destiny 2009-03-19 . chapter 1woah. amazing start. |
 Enigmatic Night 2008-10-11 . chapter 2Hi!!
Just wondering, is this story ever going to be taken off hiatus? I just found it, and I can see it hasn't been updated since '06, but it's such an interersting concept. I hope you decide to take it back up.
Awesome. |
 predict.this 2008-04-02 . chapter 2Wow... I'm really impressed with your story. It's interesting, engaging and free of any grammar/spelling error. I really like it, please write the next chapter soon! |
 KiraLove 2007-11-07 . chapter 2YAY! Two reviews for you in a day. I think this looks REALLY interesting. You always see something about the SON of the devil, but this is the first that I've seen of the Daughter of the Devil. I think you could go really far with it. |
 Fleeting Moment 2007-09-22 . chapter 2This is good! UPDATE! |
 Inkypink 2007-05-06 . chapter 2Interesting, original and well-written! Nice work, I'll be following this one :) |
 Evenunderscore 2007-01-19 . chapter 2There is a little redundency in your story, but that's not a very big deal. Once again, I thought it was funny, maybe I just have a dark sense of humor. I love your descripitions of the charachters. Keep writing. |
 Evenunderscore 2007-01-19 . chapter 1Ha Ha! What a prolugue. I really like your writing style, it's so funny, but at the same time it has a chord of seriousness. Yes, hell is preferable to living with a newborn, not that I would know. Keep writing. |
 Taiteilijan 2007-01-16 . chapter 2Once again this was amazing...I love it still. Hope you update soon ... ~ Geena |
 Taiteilijan 2007-01-16 . chapter 1This made me laugh so hard...I don't know why. It amused me immensely though and I am totally hooked. I was listening to this rock version of Phantom of the Operah too I don't know but i think that affects the mod...Ok I'm done... ~ Geena |
 Angel of Ink 2006-12-17 . chapter 2I like it!
I want to write a story about the Devil's daughter... only his biological daughter, who grew up in hell. People seem to like stories about Lucifer, so... =)
But yeah, it's quite good. |
 YuLian 2006-11-28 . chapter 2Hey, this is a really good story! Please, expand on it!
-YuLian |
 Rayne Logan 2006-11-21 . chapter 2I hope there is a future update for this, at some point. It sounds pretty cool, though the first chapter was a little confusing at points - i suggest more explanation in the next chapters, although it does set me up to want to read more, which is great, I guess that's what you were going for :P
I love the plot. I think I'm gonna have to try and find the inspiration you mentioned.
The Prologue was just as good as the first chapter, but I do hope they get longer!
Looking forward to more :) |
 Maddie Fyrce 2006-11-13 . chapter 1I love the idea. I'm also a fan of the Undead series. I hope this is as good as it seems! |