interesting. i like how you all morph from artist to soldier with no break in pattern or anything. makes for a smooth read. i also like the paralles you make between the 2 pairs of hands. it really ties the poem together. and the poem makes a diamond! which, im sure, if i really thought about it, is symbolic of something. whatever that may be. it reminds me of the time i tried to write a poem in the shape of a teardrop on the computer. and failed. it ended up being a pentagon-like shape. anyway. nice poem.

Amazing. I luffles it. Kudos! :-)