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Sari la Elfa
2006-09-18
ch 1, anon.
abusehey! this is true! i think i am cripled for life for falling too many times from my daydreaming...lolkeep it up...
my ego is far from real
2006-08-10
ch 1,
abuseI really think it's a great poem and I loved loved how it ended sorta like a fairy tale gone bad..but in a good way..not the fairy tale your poem.. I'm sure people can relate to being free and then relizing it's a night mare..wow so deep well to me
silentscreamer07
2006-08-07
ch 1,
abuse*ah* I love this! You did great! It seemed to have its own flare to this..or its own style. And I love anything to do with wings, I don't know why, it's just that, you can never go wrong with them...and this? AH! I love it!

"My Nightmare;I have no wings..."

Great job! This is awesome! *keep writing!*

ANd thank you so much for the review! AH! I feel like i know you! B/c I agree! bunnies are taking over the world as we speak, and I KNOW the skerwls are helping them...it's an awful thing! hehe
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