interesting. sorry its taken me so long to review, just been bored really, lol. loved the ending. seems a lil spooky tho. (or maybe i'm just too tired). *yawns*. lol. awesome work :)

~mez~

You really do put the rest of us to shame. "garotte string" was suprising, in a good way- you never see that used as a metaphor any more- perhaps it died with the method? I cannot tell you how many people, relationships, of which this reminds me. My only negative comment- "I could imitate your laugh or hers you like hers" seems rushed- a well placed comma (I am a great proponent of commas. xD) or some transition would work well here. But, in all aspects, truly magnificent. I feel I ought to hide. `~bella~`