Too much death by suffocation? Hahaha. I love your works, especially this one, because it's being updated continuously. At first i wasn't sure if i liked it, but now it's become very intriguing. I'd ask a lot of questions right about now, but i'm guessing they're all part of the mystery of the story. So i wont ask them. Now post another chapter, so we can all know why she screamed. Thank You! =P

great story so far! i can't wait to read more so update soon! ^.^

Hmm. Very dark. I feel like this story jsut keeps going, intense dark drama after more intense dark drama. It makes it very interesting but a bit depressing. I think it also would help if something mved the plot more- it seems to go at snail's pace. But, that may just be a side effect of the darkness of the fic. Or me comparing it to the original. Or both. Anyways, good chappie, and I REALLY want someting big to happen... or just small events, either works lol. ttyl~

...creepy thing...

what the heck?

I like Dante though.

:) CD

Oh I am ever so curious about the hall of thousands now? What the heck is it who is Dante and who is that woman? What battle was she fighting? The way you write is great for this kind of updating, serials I think they were called in the past, where the point was to keep the reader interested so they would read it the next week.

So excited to see what happens, and those other three, the other demon, the wolf and journeyman, who are they and what are they doing?

Can't wait!

I like the idea of an angry talking map as a sidekick. It's a really good beginning. There's a couple of places where you miss the odd letter but those are niggles.

Great start! I'll be reading more of this...

Please review my work

Chapter six, and I'm still intrigued! I must say, the plot is better constructed in this one than in wind's flame... Kudos!

I think I'm going to go eat chips now, but I'll read more later!

-derek

I did read wind's flame, oh-so-many years ago, and I rather liked it. Okay, so the characters didn't behave realistically, but what the heck? It's fantasy.

So, I was looking through the new posts today and 'thea lowe' rung a bell. So I came here! I do hope that this one holds my attention like the last one did.

And I never did figure out why the title of the last one was named 'wind's flame'. Was there a reason for that, or was it just convenient?

Dont' drink and drive! Read the dictionary!

-derek

huh. cool. good story. i like zirrach, and can't wait for more on how keaira's father bound him with that collar... and why the queen wants her daughter back so badly.

update?

blessed be, lily

oh keep up the great work. I really am intrigued by the story. :-D

...heh. The Library of Thousands? Thousands of what?

And... I agree wholeheartedly with Zirrach. The girl has no backbone whatsoever, or at least, not that she's shown.

:) CD

I agree. ew. Sacrifices.

ANYway... cool little fight scene.

:) CD

Oh how very interesting. Even if it's not your usual stuff. I like this story and I do hope you continue even though you are in school and working on a different story.

*twiddles her thumbs in anticipation*

Hm. Not much has happened. I guess you have much more character development in this version, but you've lost the fast moving plot in it. I always liked the fast-mocing plots in your stories. I guess there's got to be a balance between character development and plot. Hmm. *goes back to read Wind's Fire*

this is great so far!! please keep updating!