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Reviews For: White Sheets Ever You Want
Nobody-n-Particular 2006-08-09 . chapter 1
Really enjoyed the format - nice transitions using "ever" and nice rhythm
Lady Padawan 2006-08-07 . chapter 1
Wow! The structure is effective, but not so overwhelming that it dims the emotion in the piece. Loved it!
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