This is wonderfully well developed. I especially liked the ending. Very visual. The sitting in the driveway, thunder-lightning references really spark the image well. Excellent work.

I like the theme of being 'stitched up,' echoed in the "wound around the weaving," "patching the holes," and finally, "my brain is unwrapped from its cotton gauze." Although, in that last line, it's not really about being stitched up, it's about being loosened from your restraints. At least, that's the way I see it. I really enjoyed this poem; great job.