This is just gorgeous. I love this. Maybe not helpful as a review... I'm a little too tired to analyze/register things =P I'll have to read this again when I'm awake.
-Devon

This is such a nice poem! I love the line "Your star is scheduled for shooting today." Great job, and keep writing.

loved the way this flowed. lasr 2 lines were awesome. great job

Oh, your summary did not lie! Quite good, quite good. I'm pretty sure this is about love - is it? Oh well, you don't have to answer.